Friday homework

2020-09-19 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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Claire\'s homework

강사 첨삭

Hello Claire!
You\'ve completed all your homework this week. Congratulations! See you next week. <3
~~Teacher Kate

My favorite bad side superhero is ‘Harley Quin’ and for good character ‘Super Man’.
>>My favorite villain is ‘Harley Quin’ and for superheroes, it\'s ‘Super Man’.
Because Harley Quinn make my stress gone when Harley decide something or doing something.
>>It\'s because Harley Quinn takes away my stress when she decides to do something. 
She decide something very nice I’m not good at decide something or make a good choice.
>>She always decides well. I\'m not good at deciding on something or making good choices. 
For Super Man I think he is symbol of good  superhero. And I like the letter S written on his shirt.
>>For Super Man I think he is the symbol of  good superheroes and I like the letter S written on his shirt.

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