Friday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
Hello Claire!
Thank you for making your homework for last week! You did a lot haha. Great job Claire. See you in class ^^
~~Teacher Kate
My all time favorite celebrity is Ariana Grande.
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Because her voice is so beautiful.
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Also her image is really pinky.
>>Also her image is always filled with pink colors.
Just like a pink colored cotton candy.
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And I love her long Pony tails.
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Her hair style is so stylish.
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I remember that your favorite celebrity is Billie Eillish right?
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I like her too. ^^
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