Friday Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
Hello Claire!
Thank you for making your homework for friday. See you tomorrow in class! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
First I vacuum the floor of my room to make sure my room’s floor is clean.
>>CORRECT!
Second I put trashes in to the trash can that lying around my room.
>>Second I put trash into the trashcan that is lying around my room.
Third I prepare some boxes and I divide the stuff from my room.
>>Third, I prepare some boxes and I organize the stuff in my room.
Fourth I divide the boxes like this, toy, school supplies, and the things that I don’t need anymore.
>>Fourth I divide the boxes like this: toy, school supplies, and the things that I don’t need anymore.
Fifth fill the boxes with divided stuff and for toy and school supplies I put them on the shelf.
>>Fifth, I fill the boxes with organized stuff and for toy and school supplies, I put them on the shelf.
For the things that I don’t need goes to ware house or trash can.
>>the things that I don’t need go to a warehouse or the trash can.
Sixth I decorate my room with plants and my art works.
>>CORRECT!
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.