Friday homework

2021-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Sheila

학생이 쓴 원문

Q:What\'s one thing you don\'t like about your school? A:I don\'t like its playgrounds floor is made of sand. First, if floor is the sand we can be hurt by the floor. Second, I like the playground floor is made of grass.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]! Great work today!

Until the next one!

See you in class on Monday! :)

~Teacher Sheila



I don\'t like its playgrounds floor is made of sand.
>>I don\'t like that its playground\'s floor is made of sand.

First, if floor is the sand we can be hurt by the floor.
>>First, if the floor is sand, we can be hurt by the floor.

Second, I like the playground floor is made of grass.
>>Second, I like a playground floor that is made of grass.

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