Friday homework
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Q:What do you think is the hardest to paint?
A:I think the hardest thing in paint is drawing.
First, I can\'t draw something very similar with real thing so I think the hardest to paint is drawing.
Second, if someone is good at painting then he or she would draw since very long time ago so if someone is drawing first then the picture will be not that good.
Last, if when someone is painting and, if he or she do mistake then he or she can\'t erase it so painting need many concentration.
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I think the hardest thing in paint is drawing.
>>I think the hardest thing in painting is drawing.
First, I can\'t draw something very similar with real thing so I think the hardest to paint is drawing.
>>First, I can\'t draw something similar with the real thing so I think the hardest to paint is the drawing.
Second, if someone is good at painting then he or she would draw since very long time ago so if someone is drawing first then the picture will be not that good.
>>Second, if someone is good at painting then he or she could draw for a long time so if someone is a beginner in drawing then the picture will not be that good.
Last, if when someone is painting and, if he or she do mistake then he or she can\'t erase it so painting need many concentration.
>>Last, if someone is painting and if he or she made a mistake the he or she can\'t erase it so, painting needs a lot of concentration.
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