Friday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q:Tell me about the sun.
A:Sun is one of the stars in the space, and it is the middle of our solar system.
Second, sun is very bright so it has very high temperature.
Last, sun rises at 6:00 am and it sets at 6:00 pm.
강사 첨삭
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~Teacher Sheila
Sun is one of the stars in the space, and it is the middle of our solar system.
>>The sun is one of stars in space and it is in the middle of our solar system.
Second, sun is very bright so it has very high temperature.
>>Second, the sun is very bright so it has a very high temperature.
Last, sun rises at 6:00 am and it sets at 6:00 pm.
>>Last, the sun rises at 6:00 a.m. and it sets at 6:00 p.m.
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