Friday homework

2021-04-10 · 첨삭 강사 Sheila

학생이 쓴 원문

Q:What is your favorite shirt? A:My favorite shirt is comfortable and thin shirt. First, if the shirt is comfortable, I feel good when I wear it. Second, if the shirt is thin, I feel cool when I wear it. Last, if the shirt is uncomfortable and thick then I feel bad and hot so I like comfortable and thin shirt.

강사 첨삭

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~Teacher Sheila


My favorite shirt is comfortable and thin shirt.
>>CORRECT
OR>>My favorite shirt is a thin shirt because it\'s comfortable.

First, if the shirt is comfortable, I feel good when I wear it.
>>CORRECT

Second, if the shirt is thin, I feel cool when I wear it.
>>CORRECT

Last, if the shirt is uncomfortable and thick then I feel bad and hot so I like comfortable and thin shirt.
>>Last, if the shirt is uncomfortable and thick then I feel bad and hot so I like comfortable thin shirts.

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