Friday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q:Do you like Korea to have a better relationship with Japan?
A:I like Korea to have a better relationship with Japan.
First, if Korea have a better relationship with Japan then Korea can exchange with Japan.
Second, if Korea have a better relationship with Japan then Korea can get a apology from Japan.
Last, if Korea have a better relationship with Japan then Korea can get Japan\'s things or technology.
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Teacher Annie (^^)
Q: Do you like Korea to have a better relationship with Japan?
A: I like Korea to have a better relationship with Japan.
>>> CORRECT
First, if Korea have a better relationship with Japan then Korea can exchange with Japan.
>>> First, if Korea has a better relationship with Japan then Korea can exchange with Japan easily.
Second, if Korea have a better relationship with Japan then Korea can get a apology from Japan.
>>> Second, if Korea has a better relationship with Japan then Korea can get an apology from Japan for what happened in the past.
Last, if Korea have a better relationship with Japan then Korea can get Japan\'s things or technology.
>>> Last, if Korea has a better relationship with Japan then Korea can get or use Japan\'s technology.
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