Friday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q:Do you believe in the saying; \"sharing is caring\"?
A:I believe it.
First, if I share something to someone then someone will happy because he or she get something.
Second, if I share something to someone then I feel proud so I think sharing is caring.
Last, if I share something to someone then someone can do something that I shared.
강사 첨삭
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Q: Do you believe in the saying; \"sharing is caring\"?
A: I believe it.
>>> I believe in it.
OR: I believe in this saying.
First, if I share something to someone then someone will happy because he or she get something.
>>> First, if I share something with someone then he/she will be happy because he or she gets something.
Second, if I share something to someone then I feel proud so I think sharing is caring.
>>> Second, if I share something with someone then I\'ll feel good and proud so I think sharing is caring.
Last, if I share something to someone then someone can do something that I shared.
>>> Lastly, if I share something with someone then he/she can do something with the one that I have shared.
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