Friday homework
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Q:Share a story of any of the constellations.
A:I know a story about Orion constellation.
There was Orion and Artemis, and they was fall in love.
But Artemis\'s brother Apollo hate Orion.
So one day, Apollo brought Orion to beach and he ask to Artemis,
\"Can you hit that with your bow?\".
So Artemis hit Orion with her bow and Orion died.
So Orion changed to constellation.
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Q: Share a story of any of the constellations.
A: I know a story about Orion constellation.
>>> I know a story about the Orion constellation.
There was Orion and Artemis, and they was fall in love.
>>> Orion and Artemis fell in love with each other.
But Artemis\'s brother Apollo hate Orion.
>>> But Artemis\'s brother Apollo hates Orion.
So one day, Apollo brought Orion to beach and he ask to Artemis, \"Can you hit that with your bow?\".
>>> So one day, Apollo brought Orion to the beach and he asks Artemis; \"Can you hit that with your bow?\"
So Artemis hit Orion with her bow and Orion died.
>>> Artemis hit Orion using her bow and Orion died.
So Orion changed to constellation.
>>> Then Orion changed into a constellation.
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