Friday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

First physical effect of getting angry is I don\'t say anything with anyone until I am not angry.

>> First, one physical effect of getting angry is I don\'t say anything to anyone until I am not angry anymore.
Second physical effect is sometimes I hit something hard when I am very angry, but it\'s not always.

>> Second is sometimes I hit something hard when I am very angry, but I don\'t always do this.
Last physical effect of angry is my foreheads\' temperature rises, so my forehead is hot when I am angry.

>> Lastly, my forehead\'s temperature rises, so my forehead is hot when I am angry.