Friday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I think it\'s because they have not enough money for live.

>> I think it\'s because they don\'t have enough money to live in a house.
First, if they become homeless, then some people give them some foods or money.

>> If they become homeless, some people will give them some food or money.
Second, if they become homeless, then they don\'t have to buy their house and foods themselves.

>> If that is the case, then they become lazy to buy a house or food for themselves.
Lastly, I think they will buy something they need with their money someday, because they can\'t live homeless all times.

>> I think they will buy things that they need with their money someday, because they can\'t be homeless forever.