Friday homework

2021-07-27 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Q:How do you stop hiccups? A:I stop hiccups by stop breathing. If I have hiccups, then I inhale a lot of air, and I stop breathing. And if I repeat this, then hiccups stop. But if I can\'t stop hiccups by doing this, then I stop breathing and drink some warm water.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I stop hiccups by stop breathing.

>> I stop my hiccups by not breathing for a few seconds.
If I have hiccups, then I inhale a lot of air, and I stop breathing.

>> If I have hiccups, then I inhale a lot of air and I stop breathing.
And if I repeat this, then hiccups stop.

>> By repeating this, then my hiccups stop.
But if I can\'t stop hiccups by doing this, then I stop breathing and drink some warm water.

>> But if I can\'t stop my hiccups by doing this, then I hold my breath and drink some warm water.

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