Friday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

My favorite room in my house is my room.

>> My favorite room in our house is my room.
First, there are a lot of things that I bought or I received at my room and I like them so my favorite room is my room.

>> There are a lot of things that I bought or I received in my room and I like them all so my favorite room is my room.
Second, I feel better if I\'m staying at my room, so I go to my room when I\'m upset, then I feel better.

>> I feel better if I\'m staying at my room, so I go to my room when I\'m upset, then I feel better.