Friday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I think it\'s because the story of Harry Potter is novelty, so many people would be interested in that books or movies.

>> I think it\'s because the story of Harry Potter is a novelty, so many people would be interested in those books or movies.
I think at that time, many people wasn\'t that interested in magic, but Harry Potter story is about magic, so many people would be interested in that story.

>> I think at that time a lot of people weren\'t that interested in magic, but Harry Potter story is about magic then a lot of people became interested in that story.
Also, that story is not that boring, so I think it\'s a good story about magic and I think it can make peoples\' imagination better.

>> CORRECT!