Friday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I think it\'s usually because they don\'t have enough money or they don\'t have job to do.

>> I think it\'s usually because they don\'t have enough money or they don\'t have a job.
If they cannot earn money, then they can\'t pay for their house then they can be homeless.

>> If they cannot earn money, then they can\'t pay for their house, so they can become homeless.
Also, if they don\'t have any job to do, then they can\'t earn money.

>> Also, if they don\'t have a job, then they can\'t earn money.