Friday homework

2022-06-28 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q:What do you hope for yourself in the future? A:I want that I could be more honesty to other people. If I\'m honesty to other people, then other people will trust me more than before. But I\'m not that honesty to other people, right now.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I want that I could be more honesty to other people.

>> I want to be more honest with other people.
If I\'m honesty to other people, then other people will trust me more than before.

>> If I\'m honest with other people, then they will trust me more than before.
But I\'m not that honesty to other people, right now.

>> But I\'m not that honest with other people right now.

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