Friday homework

2022-07-09 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Q:If you were going on a camping trip for a week, what 3 things would you bring? Explain why. A:I think I\'ll bring tent, grill, and my phone. I need somewhere to sleep, so I\'ll bring tent, I have to eat foods so I\'ll bring grill. Also, if the camping is boring then I can do something with my phone or capture the moment that I\'m happy with my phone.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I think I\'ll bring tent, grill, and my phone.

>> I think I\'ll bring a tent, a grill, and my phone.
I need somewhere to sleep, so I\'ll bring tent, 

>> I need somewhere to sleep, so I\'ll bring a tent.

I have to eat foods so I\'ll bring grill.

>> I have to cook and eat food so I\'ll bring a grill.

Also, if the camping is boring then I can do something with my phone or capture the moment that I\'m happy with my phone.

>> Also, if camping is boring, then I can do something with my phone or capture the moment that I\'m happy with my phone.

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