Friday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I like to play a video game or eat or sleep.

>> I like to play a video game, or eat, or sleep.
In some flights, there is a monitor and controller for a video game and some games in it is fun.

>> In some planes, there is a monitor, a controller for a video game, and some games in it is fun.
Also, if the time that I stay in a flight is long, then I should eat something and I like eating snack in a flight.

>> Also, if the time that I stay in a flight is long, then I should eat something and I like eating snacks in a flight.
If the flight flies more than a hour then, I sleep in there.

>> If the flight is more than an hour, then I go to sleep.