Friday homework

2022-08-22 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Q:What is the motto of your life and why is that your motto? A:My motto of my life is \'Failure is the mother of success\'. Before, if I fail, then I felt very sad and angry. But now, I think Failure is a step going to success.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


My motto of my life is \'Failure is the mother of success\'.

>> My motto in my life is, \"Failure is the mother of success\".
Before, if I fail, then I felt very sad and angry.

>> Before, if I fail, I felt very sad and angry.
But now, I think Failure is a step going to success.

>> But now, I think failure is a step going to success.

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