Friday homework

2022-09-30 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q: How can you make a difference in the world in simple ways? A: I think I should just live my best to make a difference in the world. If I want to make a difference in the world, then I think I need to be popular. So, if I try my best to be popular, then someday, I will be popular. Then, a lot of people will listen to me.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:

I think I should just live my best to make a difference in the world.
>> CORRECT!
If I want to make a difference in the world, then I think I need to be popular.
>> CORRECT!
So, if I try my best to be popular, then someday, I will be popular.
>> CORRECT!
Then, a lot of people will listen to me.
>> Then a lot of people will listen to me.

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