Friday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I think it would be lifeless.

>> CORRECT!
Actually, I think music is the main point of making ambience, so if there isn\'t music, it would be hard to make or change ambience.

>> Actually, I think music is the main point of making ambience (ambiance), so if there isn\'t any music, it would be hard to make or change an ambience (ambiance).

Also, music makes a person to feel different.

>> Also, music makes a person feel different.