Friday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I was happy that I made a lot of friends in our school, and I first went to the middle school.

>> I was happy that I made a lot of friends in our school, and I went to middle school for the first time.
I made lot of friends, so I was happy when I went to school, 

>> I made lot of friends, so I was happy when I went to school.

and I felt fresh, because it was my first time to go to the middle school.

>> I felt fresh because it was my first time to go to middle school.
Also, I was happy that I made a huge Lego brick.

>> Also, I was happy that I built something huge with Lego bricks.