Friday homework

2023-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q: What’s the best thing to do when a person can’t fall asleep? A: I think it\'s to lay on the bed and think about something what I want to. I always do that when I can\'t fall asleep well, and if I do that, I fall in asleep when I can\'t notice that I\'m in asleep. I usually think about what I did that day.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I think it\'s to lay on the bed and think about something what I want to.

>> I think it\'s to lay on the bed and think about something that I want.
I always do that when I can\'t fall asleep well, and if I do that, I fall in asleep when I can\'t notice that I\'m in asleep.

>> I always do that when I can\'t fall asleep, and if I do that, I fall asleep and I don\'t even notice I\'m already sleeping.
I usually think about what I did that day.

>> CORRECT!

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