Friday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q: In what ways is summer the best season?
A: I think it\'s I can see the sunlight almost every day.
All people need to see the sunlight to get some vitamin D and, their mood can get better.
But I think there are more disadvantages in summer.
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A: I think it\'s I can see the sunlight almost every day.
All people need to see the sunlight to get some vitamin D and, their mood can get better.
But I think there are more disadvantages in summer.
All people need to see the sunlight to get some vitamin D and, their mood can get better.
But I think there are more disadvantages in summer.
>>I think it\'s because I can see the sunlight almost every day. All people need to see the sunlight to get some vitamin D and, their mood can get better. But I think there are more disadvantages in summer.
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