Friday homework

2023-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Elea

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Q: Do you believe ads that promise younger and healthier-looking skin? A: I don\'t really believe all of them, but sometimes I believe them when the ads are from the believable companies. There are a lot of fake ads on the online video platforms, but there are also some believable ads from some popular companies. But I usually don\'t care about them, because I don\'t really care a lot about my skin.

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Happy Friday, [이름]! Thank you for giving your opinion about the topic homework. You did great in expressing your thoughts and ideas. Keep it up!
~T. ELEA


A: I don\'t really believe all of them, but sometimes I believe them when the ads are from the believable companies. There are a lot of fake ads on the online video platforms, but there are also some believable ads from some popular companies. But I usually don\'t care about them, because I don\'t really care a lot about my skin.
>> I don\'t believe all of them, but sometimes I believe them when the ads are from believable companies. There are a lot of fake ads on online video platforms, but there are also some believable ads from some popular companies. But I usually don\'t care about them, because I don\'t care a lot about my skin.

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