Friday homework

2023-04-28 · 첨삭 강사 Elea

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Q: What has been your biggest life-changing event? A: I think my biggest life-chaning event happened when I\'m in sixth grade. I was a very quiet student until I became sixth grade in elementary school, but I talked a lot more after I became sixth grade. And I think I became more confident after that,

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Happy Friday, [이름]! Excellent job in answering your homework. Please keep up the great consistency! ^^
~T. ELEA


A: I think my biggest life-chaning event happened when I\'m in sixth grade. I was a very quiet student until I became sixth grade in elementary school, but I talked a lot more after I became sixth grade. And I think I became more confident after that.
>> I think my biggest life-changing event happened when I was in sixth grade. I was a very quiet student until I became sixth grade in elementary school, but I talked a lot more after I became sixth grade. And I think I became more confident after that.

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