Friday homework

2023-05-26 · 첨삭 강사 Elea

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Q: What strategies do you use to cope with the effects of temperature on your mood and mental health? A: I usually just change the temperature by using air conditioner or heater. Or if I cannot use the things, I just change my clothes, so I can feel cooler or warmer than before. Or if I cannot use all these ways, I just wait until the time that I can go home.

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday, [이름]! Thank you for submitting your homework. Please stay consistent and keep up the good work. 
~T. ELEA

A: I usually just change the temperature by using air conditioner or heater. Or if I cannot use the things, I just change my clothes, so I can feel cooler or warmer than before. Or if I cannot use all these ways, I just wait until the time that I can go home.
>> I usually just change the temperature by using an air conditioner or heater. Or if I cannot use these things, I just change my clothes, so I can feel cooler or warmer than before. Or if I cannot use all these ways, I just wait until the time that I can go home.

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