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Q: How has rock & roll influenced other genres of music?
A: I think rock & roll allowed other genres of music to make the sound louder.
Usually rock & roll has the loud sound, and before, a lot of music was quieter than now.
Also, after rock & roll, a lot of music use swing beat.
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A: I think rock & roll allowed other genres of music to make the sound louder. Usually rock & roll has the loud sound, and before, a lot of music was quieter than now. Also, after rock & roll, a lot of music use swing beat.
>> I think rock & roll allowed other genres of music to make the sound louder. Usually, rock & roll has a loud sound, and before, a lot of music was quieter than now. Also, after rock & roll, a lot of music uses a swing beat.
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