Friday of my life

2014-07-28 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Don't be too severe on that student; he's very ___ . sensitive 2. I think I ___ my car keys in the office. left 3. He knows it's not ___ to spit on the floor. polite 4. She receives an average weekly ___ of US$100. wage 5. John and Becky ___ vows of eternal love. exchange I had wonderful party with my friends. Did you remember last Friday teacher? I was driving and heading to home. and I arrived home at 12:30 Am. I had a plan to go party with my friends who graduated elementary school together. so I met my friend in my hometown. Saturday, we dressed up same T-shirt then we took a photo. It has been a long time since we met but we couldn't feel any awkward mood. we spent lots of time talking. one of my friends is managing an accomodation so we easily booked a room for sleeping unpacking our load, we went to seashore. I swarm in the sea and we hang around by the sea. The one thing I felt sorry is the temperature of water is too cold to swim.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework. Wow! You are fortunate that you friend is a manager. I am sure that you had a wonderful time there. You made wonderful sentences. Great! Teacher Nina   1. Don\'t be too severe on that student; he\'s very ___ .sensitive >> Correct 2. I think I ___ my car keys in the office.left >> Correct 3. He knows it\'s not ___ to spit on the floor.polite >> Correct 4. She receives an average weekly ___ of US$100.wage >> Correct 5. John and Becky ___ vows of eternal love.exchange >> Correct I had wonderful party with my friends. >> I had a wonderful party with my friends. Did you remember last Friday teacher? >> Can you still remember it teacher?>> OR: Can you still remember teacher that it happened last Friday?I was driving and heading to home. >> Correct >> OR: I was on my way home. and I arrived home at 12:30 Am. >> Correct I had a plan to go party with my friends who graduated elementary school together. >> I had a plan to go to the party with my elementary school. so I met my friend in my hometown. >> Correct Saturday, we dressed up same T-shirt then we took a photo. >> Last Saturday, we dressed up the same T-shirt then we took a photo. It has been a long time since we met but we couldn\'t feel any awkward mood. >> It has been a long time since we met but we didn\'t feel awkward. we spent lots of time talking. >> Correct one of my friends is managing an accomodation so we easily booked a room for sleeping unpacking our load, we went to seashore. >> One of my friends is a manager in a hotelm so we easily booked a room and unpacked our lodm we went to seashore. I swarm in the sea and we hang around by the sea. >> I swam and we hang around in the sea. The one thing I felt sorry is the temperature of water is too cold to swim. >> One thing I felt sorry was the temperature of water was too cold to swim.

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