Friday of my life
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Don't be too severe on that student; he's very ___ .
sensitive
2. I think I ___ my car keys in the office.
left
3. He knows it's not ___ to spit on the floor.
polite
4. She receives an average weekly ___ of US$100.
wage
5. John and Becky ___ vows of eternal love.
exchange
I had wonderful party with my friends. Did you remember last Friday teacher?
I was driving and heading to home. and I arrived home at 12:30 Am. I had a plan to go party with my friends who graduated elementary school together. so I met my friend in my hometown. Saturday, we dressed up same T-shirt then we took a photo.
It has been a long time since we met but we couldn't feel any awkward mood. we spent lots of time talking. one of my friends is managing an accomodation so we easily booked a room for sleeping unpacking our load, we went to seashore. I swarm
in the sea and we hang around by the sea. The one thing I felt sorry is the temperature of water is too cold to swim.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thanks for doing your homework.
Wow! You are fortunate that you friend is a manager.
I am sure that you had a wonderful time there.
You made wonderful sentences. Great!
Teacher Nina
1. Don\'t be too severe on that student; he\'s very ___ .sensitive
>> Correct 2. I think I ___ my car keys in the office.left
>> Correct 3. He knows it\'s not ___ to spit on the floor.polite
>> Correct 4. She receives an average weekly ___ of US$100.wage
>> Correct 5. John and Becky ___ vows of eternal love.exchange
>> Correct I had wonderful party with my friends.
>> I had a wonderful party with my friends.
Did you remember last Friday teacher?
>> Can you still remember it teacher?>> OR: Can you still remember teacher that it happened last Friday?I was driving and heading to home.
>> Correct
>> OR: I was on my way home.
and I arrived home at 12:30 Am.
>> Correct
I had a plan to go party with my friends who graduated elementary school together.
>> I had a plan to go to the party with my elementary school.
so I met my friend in my hometown.
>> Correct
Saturday, we dressed up same T-shirt then we took a photo.
>> Last Saturday, we dressed up the same T-shirt then we took a photo. It has been a long time since we met but we couldn\'t feel any awkward mood.
>> It has been a long time since we met but we didn\'t feel awkward.
we spent lots of time talking.
>> Correct
one of my friends is managing an accomodation so we easily booked a room for sleeping unpacking our load, we went to seashore.
>> One of my friends is a manager in a hotelm so we easily booked a room and unpacked our lodm we went to seashore.
I swarm in the sea and we hang around by the sea. >> I swam and we hang around in the sea.
The one thing I felt sorry is the temperature of water is too cold to swim.
>> One thing I felt sorry was the temperature of water was too cold to swim.
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