Fried rice and chili shrimp.
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The most memorable part of my vacation was the moment I ate really delicious fried rice and chili shrimp on my Vietnam trip. The fried rice was really savory and the chili shrimp was both spicy and sweet. The chef and staff of the restaurant were friendly and I was really happy to chat with my family in the cool river breeze.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
The most memorable part of my vacation was the moment I ate really delicious fried rice and chili shrimp on my Vietnam trip.
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The fried rice was really savory and the chili shrimp was both spicy and sweet.
>>> CORRECT!
The chef and staff of the restaurant were friendly and I was really happy to chat with my family in the cool river breeze.
>>> CORRECT!
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