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How many friends do you have? Two? Five? Fifty? One hundred? I don\'t know how many friends I have. However, what does \"friend\" mean to you? How is it important to you? If you are curious why l think that friends are important, read more! First, we can\'t live alone. In history class, I learned that humans can\'t live alone in the past because, it was too dangerous to live alone. It\'s not dangerous were I live, but friends can give great help. It\'s just like the past. We have to help each other. Friends help me, I can not be happy if there were no friends to help me. Second, friends can give me comfort me. When I am tired, friends comfort me. When I am sick, friends comfort me. When my friends is sad, I comfort the friend. My friend said she felt much better after I comforted her, and gave me a letter. We can comfort each other. If your friend comforts you, you feel much better. Third, playing with my friend is more fun. Sometimes, it is boring to play many games.
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Hello, Rose. How are you? It\'s been a while. Hope all is good. Thank you for sending this in.
T. Matt
How many friends do you have? Two? Five? Fifty? One hundred?
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I don\'t know how many friends I have.
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However, what does \"friend\" mean to you? How is it important to you?
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If you are curious why l think that friends are important, read more!
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First, we can\'t live alone.
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In history class, I learned that humans can\'t live alone in the past because, it was too dangerous to live alone.
>>In history class, I learned that humans can\'t live alone in the past, because it was too dangerous to live alone.
It\'s not dangerous were I live, but friends can give great help.
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It\'s just like the past.
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We have to help each other.
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Friends help me, I can not be happy if there were no friends to help me.
>>Friends help me. I can not be happy if I didn\'t have friends to help me.
Second, friends can give me comfort me.
>>Second, friends can give comfort me.
When I am tired, friends comfort me.
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When I am sick, friends comfort me.
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When my friends is sad, I comfort the friend.
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My friend said she felt much better after I comforted her, and gave me a letter.
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We can comfort each other.
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If your friend comforts you, you feel much better.
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Third, playing with my friend is more fun.
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Sometimes, it is boring to play many games.
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