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2021-09-01 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Teacher, Jane I met a friend last evening her nephew opened a bakery in Jin ju city. Nephew is not narried yet. So, it is still difficult to do business due to lack of experience. Currently my friend is helping him

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!
What a beautiful day!
Keep yourself motivated. I am vey happy in your performance. You are actually getting better everyday. Keep up the good work! I hope that you will have an extraordinary day.
Take care. ^_^
T. Jeny

Teacher, Jane

>>Teacher Jeny,
I met a friend last evening her nephew opened a bakery in Jin ju city.

>>I met a friend last evening because her nephew opened a bakery in Jinju City.
Nephew is not narried yet.

>>Her nephew is not married yet.
So, it is still difficult to do business due to lack of experience.

>>It is difficult to do business due to lack of experience.
Currently my friend is helping him

>>correct.

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