friend 2

2011-09-02 · 첨삭 강사 Dominic

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At that time, my friend called and told me "Didn't you think that you would give me some gift money if I had the wedding ceremony? you know my situation, can you give me gift money first?" While she was talking, she cried. But when I talked to her, my mood is not good. Of course I understood how she felt. But It was been a very long time phone call. I felt she knocked me whenever she only had a hard time. But I could not ignore her offer. So I helped her. After helping her, she didn't call me and knock me at all. When she moved to new house, I knew the truth through the internet blog. She seemed to forget me after being ok.

강사 첨삭

Compo 2: Thanks Ms. [Name], looks like I have to read all of it the next time I comment. Ooops! J   At that time, my friend called and told me "Didn't you think that you would give me some gift money if I had the wedding ceremony? >>At that time my friend called me and said, Do you think you can give me some gift money?if I had the wedding ceremony? you know my situation, can you give me gift money first?" >>You know my situation, but can you give me the money gift first? While she was talking, she cried. >>CORRECT But when I talked to her, my mood is not good. >>But when I talked to her, I didn't feel good.  Of course I understood how she felt. >>CORRECT But It was been a very long time phone call. >>But it was a very long phone call.  I felt she knocked me whenever she only had a hard time. >>I felt she would only knock on my door when she is having a hard time.  But I could not ignore her offer. So I helped her. >>But I couldn't ignore her proposal so I helped her.After helping her, she didn't call me and knock me at all. >>After helping her she didn't call me at all. When she moved to new house, I knew the truth through the internet blog. >>When she moved to a new house, I found out about the truth throug a blog. She seemed to forget me after being ok. >>It seems that she has already forgotten about me when she was okay.  

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