friend (2)

2019-11-15 · 첨삭 강사 Matt

학생이 쓴 원문

We can play Freeze tag, Earth escape, and hide and seek. It\'s so fun to play with a friend. Now, do you understand why l think friend are important? They can help, comfort, and play with me. Do you think friends are important? Friends are key for a happy day.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Rose. Here\'s the second part. Have a great weekend ahead! Hope to hear from you soon. Take care!
T. Matt
We can play Freeze tag, Earth escape, and hide and seek.
>>Correct
It\'s so fun to play with a friend.
>>Correct
Now, do you understand why l think friend are important? 
>>Now, do you understand why l think friends are important? 
They can help, comfort, and play with me. 
>>Correct
Do you think friends are important? 
>>Correct
Friends are key for a happy day.
>>Correct
>> Friends are the key to a happy day!

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