Friend in need is indeed
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I really agree with it. Actually, there are a lot of weird people. Some of people use their friend just like subject. I can’t understand these behavior. I really cherish my friendship. And i really try to help my friend if he wants my help. Of course i rent my own money for him. It rather give a wrong effect on our friendship. So in my case, except for money i really attempt to help my friend
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Nice thoughts, [이름]! I also heard a lot of stories about a ruined friendship because of money, so it is really awful. May your friendship last a lifetime.-Faith-
I really agree with it. >> CORRECT
Actually, there are a lot of weird people.
>> CORRECT
Some of people use their friend just like subject.
>> Some people use their friends just like an object.
OR Some people just want to take advantage of their friends.
I can’t understand these behavior.
>> I can’t understand this behavior.
I really cherish my friendship.
>> I really cherish my friend.
And i really try to help my friend if he wants my help.
>> Also, I really try to help my friend if he wants my help.
Of course i rent my own money for him.
>> However, I do not lend my own money to him.
It rather give a wrong effect on our friendship.
>> It would rather give a negative effect on our friendship.
So in my case, except for money i really attempt to help my friend
>> Therefore, in my case, except for money, I really attempt to help my friend.
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