friend & nightmare
학생이 쓴 원문
I had a nightmare last night. In dream, my friend left her baby under my care. Suddenly the baby disappeared and I was looking for the baby. But I could not find him. I really embarrassed in my dream.
Does this nightmare represent something bad? I do not know yet.
But maybe not..
I believe the nightmare is just nightmare.
강사 첨삭
Well just a thought Ms. [Name], it has been said that our dreams are reflections of our inner desires and conflicts or subconscious. But it would still depend on how you interpret your own dreams. J Later!
-T.Dominic-
I had a nightmare last night.
>>CORRECT
In dream, my friend left her baby under my care.
>>CORRECT
Suddenly the baby disappeared and I was looking for the baby.
>>CORRECT
But I could not find him.
>>CORRECT
I really embarrassed in my dream.
>>I was really embarrased in my dream.Does this nightmare represent something bad?
>>CORRECT
I do not know yet.
>>CORRECTBut maybe not..>>Maybe not. [but and not =redundant]I believe the nightmare is just nightmare.
>>I believe that a nightmare is just a nightmare.
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