Friends (1)

2013-04-16 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Friends is my best favorite drama in my whole life through including movie, sport or something In this TV show, the most famous in the world is appeared 6 different character, 3 men & 3 women. And this TV show has been produced 10 seasons since 1994 to 2004. When the first season started in 1994, I was only 5. I guess when I knew this TV show for the first time though the internet, I was about 16. At that time, the sitcom 6 character had made funny stories attracted my interest. then I surfed whole broadcasting web site and I found one of broadcasting at last that broadcast Friends. I guess the season that I saw the first time was season 8. even tough I saw season 8 first, not season 1, it was very fun for me than my expected. So I downloaded all of those seasons on the internet. Basically I planed to buy all of those DVD but I gave up the plan because it was too expensive to buy at that my age.

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\"Friends\" is an interesting choice for you but I understand why you like the show. Enjoy watching episodes of your favorite TV series! It\'s also a good way to improve your communication skills. But hey, dont forget to rest for tomorrow\'s class! See you and take care. T.Jane   Friends is my best favorite drama in my whole life through including movie, sport or something. >>\"Friends\" is my favorite drama series because it entertains me like the movies or sports.In this TV show, the most famous in the world is appeared 6 different character, 3 men & 3 women. >>In this show, 6 different characters are featured: 3 men and 3 women.And this TV show has been produced 10 seasons since 1994 to 2004. >>This show already produced ten seasons from 1994 to 2004.When the first season started in 1994, I was only 5. >>CORRECT >>OR When the first season started in 1994, I was only 5 years old.I guess when I knew this TV show for the first time though the internet, I was about 16. >>When I knew about the show, I was about 16 years old.At that time, the sitcom 6 character had made funny stories attracted my interest. >>The interesting stories of the six characters attracted me.then I surfed whole broadcasting web site and I found one of broadcasting at last that broadcast Friends. >>From then on, I didn\'t stop searching for sites that broadcast episodes of \"Friends\".I guess the season that I saw the first time was season 8. >>The first episode I\'ve seen was in Season 8. even tough I saw season 8 first, not season 1, it was very fun for me than my expected. >>Even though I started with Season 8, I didn\'t expect that the show would be so much fun.So I downloaded all of those seasons on the internet. >>So I downloaded all the seasons from the internet.Basically I planed to buy all of those DVD but I gave up the plan because it was too expensive to buy at that my age. >>I originally planned to buy all the show\'s DVDs but I gave the plan up because the DVDs are too expensive for me.

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