Friendship
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Theme : [ESSAY] What does friendship mean to you?
It means \"Love\".
Because friendship can\'t be stayed when there isn\'t love.
And friendship can go to love. (In )
Love and Consideration too.
When there\'s considerations, you can stay the friendship.
I think friendship is \"Love\" and \"Consideration\".
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Theme : [ESSAY] What does friendship mean to you?
It means \"Love\".
Because friendship can\'t be stayed when there isn\'t love.
>> It means \"Love\" because friendship can\'t be maintained when there isn\'t love.
And friendship can go to love. (In )
>> And friendship can turn into love.
Love and Consideration too.
>> or: Love and consideration are essential as well.
When there\'s considerations, you can stay the friendship.
>> When there\'s consideration, friendship can remain and last.
I think friendship is \"Love\" and \"Consideration\".
>> or: Hence, I believe friendship is equivalent to \"Love\" and \"Consideration\".
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