Friendship

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What is the most important thing in life?

>>correct!

People says that it is love, interest, emotion, speech, action, and so on.

>>People say that it is love, interest, emotion, speech, action, and so on.

Everything is important.

>>correct!

There is no less important in this world.

>>There is nothing which is less important in this world.

People don\'t just know the fact.

>>People just don\'t know the facts.

But don\'t forget some of them.

>>correct!

First, it keeps a promise.

>>First is to keep a promise.

Promise is not to make but to keep it.

>>A promise is not to be made but to be kept.

To break a promise is to break himself.

>>To break a promise means braking yourself.

Take other people\'s time..., eat his works.... There is a lot of damage.

>>You waste other people\'s time and so it can cause a lot of damage.

Second, you have to get a confidence.

>>Second, you have to have confidence.

Confidence is the basis of all action.

>>Confidence is the basis of all actions.

If you don\'t have trust, you will be hard to life in society.

>>If you are not trusted, your life will be hard in the society.

And finally, you must be truth and sincere.

>>And finally, you must be truthful and sincere.

This all is very important in social life.

>>These are all very important in one\'s social life.

Especiallyit is the more by friends.

>> Especially if you have more friends.

Friendship is on the basis of promise, confidencd, truth and sincere.

>>Friendship is based on a promises, confidence, truth and sincerity.

And so friendship is the most important relationship in life.

>>correct!