Friendship is the most important relationship.
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear Teacher Sheila!
Hello! I\'m Tony.
I think health is very important. Teacher\'s advice is good job.
I must be following routine. Thanks a lot!
homework
Friendship is the most important relationship.
I agree. Because that\'s the most pure in the world. Your friendship is very important to me. thank you.
강사 첨삭
Hello Tony! Indeed, our health is very important. So, always take care of yourself.
Until the next one! :)
See you in class! ^_^
~Teacher Sheila
>>CORRECT
I must be following routine.
I agree.
Teacher\'s advice is good job.
>>Teacher\'s advice is a good job.
I must be following routine.
>>I must be following a routine.
OR>>I must follow a routine.
I agree.
>>CORRECT
Because that\'s the most pure in the world.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Because that\'s the purest in the world.
Your friendship is very important to me.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Being friends with you is very important to me.
thank you.
>>Thank you.
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