Friendship is the most important relationship. Do you agree? Why? Why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t agree. Of course, friendship is an important relationship. But I can\'t agree it is the most important.
Because there are many relationships among people. For example, family, couple and so on.
They are also very important relationships. And I don\'t think that which relationship is important is important,
but the object of relationship is important. It is just with whom.
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>>CORRECT
OR>>I disagree to this statement.
Of course, friendship is an important relationship. But I can\'t agree it is the most important.
>>Of course, friendship is an important relationship but I can\'t agree that it is the most important.
Because there are many relationships among people.
>>CORRECT
For example, family, couple and so on.
>>For example, family, couple, and so on.
They are also very important relationships.
>>CORRECT
And I don\'t think that which relationship is important is important, but the object of relationship is important.
>>And I don\'t think that which relationship is important but the object of relationship is more important.
It is just with whom.
>>CORRECT
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