Friendship is the most important relationship in life?

Some people say friendship is the most important relationship in life. Is that really true? Let's take a look at the cycle of life. In infancy, family relationship are more important than friends. Especially, parental affection is absolute. Everything a parent does affects their children's well-being. Parental discord has a bad effect on children. As children grow bigger, they become influenced by their friends. When parental influence are low, peer influences are high. But as getting old, they are like and enjoy alone more time than friends. It is called 'Single people'. There are many single women who are not married around me. Some of them are professors, and another have professions. They lived alone hard to enjoy their life. As she got older, I could find something in common with them. They felt lonely. They need a family than friends. They want to be with someone and communicate with someone. Family get together at any times. I think family is the most important relationship.

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Some people say friendship is the most important relationship in life.
>> correct!
Is that really true? Let\'s take a look at the cycle of life.
>> correct!
In infancy, family relationship are more important than friends.
>> In infancy, family relationship is more important than friends.
Especially, parental affection is absolute.
>> correct!
Everything a parent does affects their children\'s well-being.
>> correct!
Parental discord has a bad effect on children.
>> correct!
As children grow bigger, they become influenced by their friends.
>> correct!
When parental influence are low, peer influences are high.
>> correct!
But as getting old, they are like and enjoy alone more time than friends.
>> But as they are getting old, they like and enjoy more alone time than friends.
It is called \'Single people\'.
>> correct!
There are many single women who are not married around me.
>> correct!
Some of them are professors, and another have professions.
>> Some of them are professors and others have different professions.
They lived alone hard to enjoy their life.
>> They live alone and enjoy their lives.
As she got older, I could find something in common with them.
>> As they got older, I could find something common with them.
They felt lonely. They need a family than friends.
>> They feel lonely. They needed family more than friends.
They want to be with someone and communicate with someone.
>> correct!
Family get together at any times. I think family is the most important relationship.
>> Families can get together at any time. I think family is the most important relationship.