From before the industrial revolution economists and other experts
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I partly agree with this expression. To begin with, I can already see technical advances in the automobile industry, medical fields and so on. Many different robots make entire automobile and they can even perform certain surgery in some operating room in big hospitals. In fact, there are many people who lost their jobs because of robots. However, I also think that it is impossible for robots to completely replace human being as they are not perfect and they definitely need someone to supervise them at some point. Besides, until now, the role of robots is limited to a certain job or condition. Therefore, I think that it will take far much more time and technology to remove people in any work setting.
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I partly agree with this expression.
>>CORRECT
To begin with, I can already see technical advances in the automobile industry, medical fields and so on.
>>CORRECT
Many different robots make entire automobile and they can even perform certain surgery in some operating room in big hospitals.
>>Many different robots can make an entire automobile and they can even perform surgeries on humans in big hospitals.
In fact, there are many people who lost their jobs because of robots.
>>CORRECT or
>>In fact, a lot of people have lost their jobs because of them.
However, I also think that it is impossible for robots to completely replace human being as they are not perfect and they definitely need someone to supervise them at some point.
>>CORRECT (*human beings)
Besides, until now, the role of robots is limited to a certain job or condition.
>>CORRECT
Therefore, I think that it will take far much more time and technology to remove people in any work setting.
>>CORRECT or you can use the word replace instead of remove.
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