From My report

2012-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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this essay is form my report.... It is possible to use "DICOM Media Backup" feature and save the image as instructional CD. When move patients to other hospital, the patient's images are able to send saved CD insted of films (include Simple Viwer)

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Hi [이름]! Thank you for sending a composition. Here are your corrections. Have a great day! ~Teacher Dianne~   this essay is form my report....>> This essay is from my report.It is possible to use \"DICOM Media Backup\" feature and save the image as instructional CD. >> It is possible to use the \"DICOM Media Backup\" feature and save the images as an instructional CD. When move patients to other hospital, the patient\'s images are able to send saved CD insted of films (include Simple Viwer) >> When we move patients to another hospital, their images will be sent using the CD instead of films (including the Simple Viewer).  

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