from Sarah

2011-12-21 · 첨삭 강사 Michelle

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, Joey. Today I delay our english class until January 2. As I mentioned last week, next week I am not able to have class for family trip. And from tomorrow I have to leave my home earlier every morning until this Friday because of my schedule. So I am not available to have english class until January 2. I hope that you have merry Christmas and happy new year!! See you January. from Sarah.

강사 첨삭

Hi there. I checked the composition you made. It\'s good but I have to check some of your sentences. I hope you enjoy your vacation with your family. Happy holiday! (^_^)

Teacher Joey

 

Hello, Joey.
>>CORRECT

Today I delay our english class until January 2.

>> Today, I cancelled our English class and will resume on January 2.
As I mentioned last week, next week I am not able to have class for
family trip.

>> As I mentioned last week, next week I am not able to have class because we will have a family trip.

And from tomorrow I have to leave my home earlier every morning until this Friday because of my schedule.

>>CORRECT
So I am not available to have english class until January 2.

>>CORRECT
I hope that you have merry Christmas and happy new year!!

>>I hope you will have a merry Christmas and a happy New Year!
See you January.

>>CORRECT
from Sarah.

>>From Sarah.

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