From what age is it okay to start dating?

2023-12-04 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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I\'d like to recommend my child you are going to date whenever possible. But, you should know about contraception with each other. I want to let my child know about responsibility of your behavior. The funny thing is if I have my own daughter, she wants to star dating. Maybe... I can\'t allow her to do it with my own son. So, I will consider it. :)

강사 첨삭

Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


I\'d like to recommend my child you are going to date whenever possible. 
>> I\'d like to recommend my child, \"you are going to date whenever possible\"
But, you should know about contraception with each other. 
>> But, you should know about contraception to avoid problems with each other. 
I want to let my child know about responsibility of your behavior. 
>> CORRECT!
The funny thing is if I have my own daughter, she wants to star dating. 
>> CORRECT!
Maybe... I can\'t allow her to do it with my own son. 
>> CORRECT!
So, I will consider it. :)
>> CORRECT!

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