"Frozen"

Hi. Paula. I was in the meeting with my friends when you called me. I could not join our class. Anyway, I'll continue to write about the "Frozen" for you. The first daughter's name is "Elsa", and second daughter's name is "Anna" When they were young, they played together well by using the magic. The magic come from Elsa's hand. If Elsa move her hand, icestrom come and make somthing frozen. However, She didn't know how to control it. Once they were playing well, Elsa's magic hurt Anna unintentionally.

Hi [이름]! TGIF!!! Thanks God it\'s Friday! Hahaha! Happy Friday!   Thank you for continuing the story for me, but I think it is not yet finish, right? I am happy that you found time to make this composition to inform me about things, especially about \"Frozen\". I can imagine what is happening in the story because of your narration. However, I feel a little pity for Elsa because of her magic. Her magic gave her much suffer. It really seemed like she couldn\'t live in a normal life. Anyway, I will wait for the continuation of the story. ^^   By the way, you still made a good composition. Just don\'t forget to check some corrections and suggestions below.   Have a great weekend! See you!   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Hi. Paula.>> Hi Paula! I was in the meeting with my friends when you called me.>> CORRECT! >> BETTER: I was with my friends when you called me. >> OR: I was in the middle of a meeting with my friends when you called me. I could not join our class.>> CORRECT! Anyway, I\'ll continue to write about the \"Frozen\" for you.>> Anyway, I\'ll continue to write about \"Frozen\" for you. The first daughter\'s name is \"Elsa\", and second daughter\'s name is \"Anna\">> The first daughter\'s name is \"Elsa\", and the second is named \"Anna\". When they were young, they played together well by using the magic.>> CORRECT! The magic come from Elsa\'s hand.>> The magic came from Elsa\'s hands. >> OR: The magic is from Elsa\'s hands. If Elsa move her hand, icestrom come and make somthing frozen.>> If Elsa moves her hands, ice storms come and make something frozen. However, She didn\'t know how to control it.>> However, she didn\'t know how to control it. Once they were playing well, Elsa\'s magic hurt Anna unintentionally. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Once the sisters were playing well, Elsa hurt Anna by her magic unintentionally.