fruits
학생이 쓴 원문
Consumer\'s taste and choice is changing not also in fruit but also in food.
Young people don\'t enjoy Korean traditional food like kimch or ricecake.
Even my daughters rately eat kimchi.
They tend to prefer fusion food with butter or cheese of western style.
one other thing, I beliene that social class\'s gap are also revealed in fruit and food choices.
Shine Muscat is very expensive comparing to ither fruits.
The poor never eat fersh fruits.
They cannot help eating to eat high- calorie and salty delivery food or packed lunches.
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Consumer\'s taste and choice is changing not also in fruit but also in food.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> Consumer\'s palate preference is also changing not only in fruit but in food.
Young people don\'t enjoy Korean traditional food like kimchi or rice cake.
>>> CORRECT!
>>> Even my daughters rarely eat kimchi.
They tend to prefer fusion food with butter or cheese of western style.
>>> They tend to prefer Westernized style fusion food with butter or cheese.
one other thing, I beliene that social class\'s gap are also revealed in fruit and food choices.
>>> One more thing, I believe that the social class gap is also revealed based on their fruit and food choices.
Shine Muscat is very expensive comparing to ither fruits.
>>> Shine Muscat is very expensive compared to other fruits
The poor never eat fersh fruits.
>>> The poor never eat fresh fruits.
They cannot help eating to eat high- calorie and salty delivery food or packed lunches
Young people don\'t enjoy Korean traditional food like kimchi or rice cake.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> These days, some young people no longer enjoy eating Korean traditional food like kimchi or rice cake.
Even my daughters rately eat kimchi.>>> Even my daughters rarely eat kimchi.
They tend to prefer fusion food with butter or cheese of western style.
>>> They tend to prefer Westernized style fusion food with butter or cheese.
one other thing, I beliene that social class\'s gap are also revealed in fruit and food choices.
>>> One more thing, I believe that the social class gap is also revealed based on their fruit and food choices.
Shine Muscat is very expensive comparing to ither fruits.
>>> Shine Muscat is very expensive compared to other fruits
The poor never eat fersh fruits.
>>> The poor never eat fresh fruits.
They cannot help eating to eat high- calorie and salty delivery food or packed lunches
>>> They cannot help eating high-calorie and salty delivery food or packed lunches.
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