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2012-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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Do you like your name? I like my name. Iy name is John or Jane in Enlgish it's not a meaningful name. I don't care about this name. Because i don't think of this name in detail. But i do care of my Korean name. Becuase my father made my name when i was born. When i was young, i didn't like my name because ny name is like girl's name in Koea. My name is [Name]-Hwa Jung, it means a public officer. My father has good skills about foretelling the future. Korean called Sa-Ju, and my birthday is also some weird. My birthday is July.7. So my father was foretold at that time so my name was made. What is your dream right now? I have one dream that is having only harmony relationshop with my family. as for me,I don't know why many people prefer to want to make alot of money or get good jobs. It's not good for me, i also wanted to get the same golds when i was young. But nowaday i was changed, i don't care of that. And i am interested in Enligh, it's good enough for me.

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Hi [이름]!! I totally aprreciate your consistency to learn. Just continue to explore more of you skills. Be mindful about my corrections. Have fun. Stay motivated. Teacher Lara   Do you like your name? >> CorrectI like my name. >> CorrectIy name is John or Jane in Enlgish it\'s not a meaningful name. >> CorrectI don\'t care about this name. >> CorrectBecause i don\'t think of this name in detail. >> Because I don\'t think about the detail of this name.But i do care of my Korean name. >> CorrectBecuase my father made my name when i was born. >> Because my father was the who gave my name right after I was born.When i was young, i didn\'t like my name because ny name is like girl\'s name in Koea. >> CorrectMy name is Ji-Hwa Jung, it means a public officer. >> Correct My father has good skills about foretelling the future. >> CorrectKorean called Sa-Ju, and my birthday is also some weird. >> Korean called it Sa-Ju, and birthday is also weird.My birthday is July.7. >> CorrectSo my father was foretold at that time so my name was made. >> CorrectWhat is your dream right now? >> CorrectI have one dream that is having only harmony relationshop with my family. >> I have one dream that is to have a harmonious relationship with my family.as for me,I don\'t know why many people prefer to want to make alot of money or get good jobs. >> As for me, I don\'t know why many people prefer to make a lot of money and get good jobs.It\'s not good for me, i also wanted to get the same golds when i was young. >> CorrectBut nowaday i was changed, i don\'t care of that. >> But nowadays I have changed and I don\'t care about that.And i am interested in Enligh, it\'s good enough for me. >> And I am only interested in English, it\'s good enough for me.

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